Swipe to see who's online now!
All Comments on 'Sovereignty Ch. 02'
by Pars001
Sort by:
- 11 Comments
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoJust please bring all your work to this site I'm sure all your readers would appreciate it.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI will agree with the first comment.
It was a good chapter but you cut it short. So hopefully you will not make this into a one page per chapter story. Try to at least make it two full pages.
hellinahelmetalmost 7 years agoBring it on...
Am enjoying your stories.....bring ´em along for the ride...
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoIs this a rough draft?
I'm only asking because that's how it seemed with how quickly the story is moving and how it feels like the chapters could be fleshed out a lot more. The story definotely has potential but it just feels so damn rough.
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Pars001@Pars001Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...
Swipe to see more cams!
READ MORE OF THIS SERIES
SIMILAR Stories
Awakenings Ch. 01
4.49
104
9
Endangered Ch. 01
4.8
1.2k
51
Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 001
4.66
2.8k
158
A Gift From His Father Ch. 01
4.52
2.2k
66
A Guy and His...? Ch. 01
More Stories4.49
309
9
