All Comments on 'Sovereignty Ch. 06'

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gregsjlngregsjlnover 6 years ago
oh boi

I know you're and and it's not easy putting out all these stories, great work even though the chapters are short your stories are still great

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
????????

"I know you're and and it's not easy putting out all these stories, great work even though the chapters are short your stories are still great"

What are you talking about, it's not easy putting out all these stories?.

They have already been written and posted on other sites. Sovereignty is 19 chapters long and was finished in August last year. Pars like to dribble them out 1 chapter at a time because he likes seeing his name at the top of the story board all the time.

You can find all pars stories listed on SOL.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
Not great, but enjoyable

Even if the grammar makes it hard to follow easily. Please check you sentence construction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Grammer & Punctuation

Interesting stuff. BUT. Please get help with U're punctuation.

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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