All Comments on 'Sovereignty Ch. 13'

WHY DON'T YOU FINISH THIS WORK OF ART? WHEN WILL YOU FINISH THIS WORK OF ART?

Or maybe I should say, Grammar. It is getting worse with each chapter. Are you rushing too much to release stories and forgetting to read them yourself?

This unfortunately, has become too difficult to plough through. Good story lost to poor editing. Shame.

Is the evil champion someone we would know??