All Comments on 'Spanish Fly'd'

DirtyJoe you have done it again! Loved the story, can't wait for Part 2 with the boys!!!

Since there is no verb 'to Spanish Fly', 'Spanish Fly'd' can only mean 'Spanish Fly Would' or 'Spanish Fly Had'.

Would or had what? If the title makes no sense, it hardly seems worth reading further.

Hey, if YOU write the story, YOU name it. There was no verb form of the word "google" until very recently. I don't know what your problem is, but English language, like most others, is constantly morphing based on current usage. Don't be a jerk-off (your pardon, since you're from the UK it'd be 'wanker').

Dirty Joe, I thought the story decent, though I wasn't sure I'd like the direction it took when it's intended use was discovered. I think you've killed any expansion into other characters (literally and figuratively) as a result. For that reason it's not 100. Maybe it'll take some interesting spin and I'll rethink the rating.

Need to keep writing! Maybe next time she won't know and you can add more players? What about the football team and a little force?

Disappointed when read she substituted the drug - none left for next time.