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All Comments on 'Sparks of Moonlight'

by KillerRomance

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domrogerdomrogerover 14 years ago
Disagree

If this is not the best you can write I look forward to reading the revised version.

angelshellieangelshellieover 14 years ago
can't agree

I loved it

AlitheAlitheover 14 years ago
I didn't see your comment until after I read...

but it was great anyways.

KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 14 years agoAuthor
AUTHOR HERE:

THE STORY HAS BEEN SWITCHED WITH THE EDITED DRAFT. YOU GUYS CAN READ AND VOTE FOR IT NOW(:

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OH MY GOD!

That was just.. heartbreaking! The descriptions were so real it was like actually being there and not being able to help. It was so so SO very heartbreaking! ...I don't suppose theres ANY chance of a happy ending for those two is there? - Laxmy.

candyandcreamcandyandcreamover 14 years ago
Perfect as always! i loved it.

it was beautiful and heartbreaking and just SO eerily real! Is there any chance of a sequel?... please:)?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Beautiful and haunting!

your writing style is impeccable! i loved this piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i hope you win

this as a really great piece of work.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Sexy

I truly enjoyed reading this story. It was inspiring and very sexy and hot.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Creepy ...... Magic story written with a magic pencil ....... Wonderful

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