All Comments on 'Special Deliveries Ch. 02.2'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Great story!

Loved this story. As all your previous stories.

stroudle over 4 years ago

Wonderful conclusion

Riley and Elsa are amongst my favourites of your couples, they seem so well suited.

I just love how you wrote the quarel, a funny thing to comment on perhaps, but it seemed very real. Riley walking away and holding the side to settle down and the silent apology from Elsa, brilliant writing . And the blind panic towards the end made me smile too.

Special deliveries took on a new twist and meaning with this chapters ending.

Thank you Smokey, as always a delight to see you posted a new story

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