by sunburycd
Holy cow, sunburycd! What a wonderfully exciting and sexy story! Definitely looking forward to more!
Thank you for blessing us with 2 stories within days of each other. Can't wait to get reading
Great story and I think that a few more chapters would only make it better. The special connection that was developing between Aaron, Madeline and Sophie was great. Look forward to more chapters. Well Done. 5 ++ stars
AMAZING! It was creative as all-get-out, so refreshing. Extremely well written and characters are developed relatively quickly, with room to grow as you continue. There is so much meat on the bone* left. I think introducing his mother is a little too far fetched. Just my humble opinion. Reguardless, I am looking forward to your next installment! Saw you updated your profile. Don’t give misery company. Those miserable keyboard tough-guys/gals are viruses wanting to infect you.
Outstanding story that can grow and continue on for ever, looking forward to the next story.............():\
I so wish you continue the saga to see how he and his mother would enjoy the activities