All Comments on 'Speeding Ticket'

I enjoyed your story. Keep 'em coming.

This was great...I was disappointed that it ended when it did! I can't wait for more of your stuff!

I enjoyed this story, but it moved a little fast. The description of the sex acts was brief after your great build up. Describe the sex a little more and you will be writing hits. Thanks for your work.

I liked the pace of it. Sure, it could have been elongated, but the arousal factor was there for me. So much so, I'm gonna have to say I mentally cursed you out by finishing like that and leaving me hanging! Dad gum it! If you don't come up with chapter two of this, I'm not gonna share my crayons with you anymore!

I liked the story and thought it was a good start since this was your first entry. It did move rather quickly, maybe have more of a build up. Keep up the good work which will cause me to surely "keep up" my end while reading them.

Allen

derailr@aol.com

would love to get "patted down" by that guy. He sounds so incredibly hot. I can understand why she was so willing to let him search her. Great story.

Thank you for a fine effort. I see this is your first story and I hope you are encouraged to do several more.

Nice job out of the gate... enjoyed the story... looking forward to more!

I think any story that can arouse me is tip-top. Keep on writing!

omg ... sexxy ... I can visualize her walking a line in heels .. then bending over, exposing her ass ... yummm *drool* .... off to read the next part ...

I have one complaint and one complaint only...it's not long enough. I have to check out chapter 2.

May I just add to the comment about the story not being long enough? This is the second story of yours I have read and it is oh so definitely not going to be the last. I would just encourage you to write more :-D Erotic without the need to be crude- simply spellbinding!

I just read this cuz I saw you complaine that it had just fallen off the "H". It deserves to get it back. :D

I can't wait to read Chapter 2... very well written

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