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I was using an artist's brush to carefully remove debris from the pottery shard. It was painstaking work but worth the effort. I had freed enough of the piece to remove it from the earth. I had already marked its position on the map. I sat back and examined the markings on the piece when I saw something glitter in the soil. I put the shard down and using a hand spade gently moved the dirt to reveal the piece of untarnished metal.
I cried out and the professor was there in no time. He watched me as I revealed the gold coin. It was a traditional Chinese coin. It was round with a square cut out of the middle. There were a series of marking on both sides of coin. While I could speak Mandarin fluently I was still very rusty on reading it. I took the treasure from the soil and handed it to my boss. He whistled softly as he translated the markings. I spent the time marking the coin on the map beneath the pottery shard.
"You have quite a treasure," the professor said joyfully. "I have heard rumors of such things but to actually hold one."
"What is it," I asked looking up at him.
"Why my boy this is none other than a first dynasty Lei Ting. This coin was minted by the Taoist sorcerers to bind demons."
"Oh hell," I said feeling a chill despite the temperature. "Is it still in there?"
"Of course not," the professor said smiling. "There is no such thing as demons."
A sudden wind sprang up from the South and clouds sprang up from a clear sky. The entire camp came to a halt and looked up at the darkening sky. I stood up and took the coin from the professor's grasp. I patted him on the shoulder and gripped the coin tight.
"Here we go again..."
- COMMENTS
Aussie1951over 2 years agoSadly I must agree with the previous comments below. Love his sister though. … but as for the story ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis would be a good 15 page romantic story. Sadly, it's a mediocre 7 page wank story. Lemme contribute:
Introduce people. The friend that held onto the bag didn't even have a name or face. His preparations on the necklace thing too.
Develop relationships. He doesn't get jealous about the cowboy when the sister first meets him? Fine, but ELABORATE on that. His relationships are nothing and that makes for a shallow story.
The relationships are all super dull. His sister was good, then the obvious huge change in the story came with the succubus; she was being possessed? Wtf does that mean? Does she not want him anymore? Did she forget? What about the fact that they fucked before he found the book? This was a great opportunity for an a-ha moment developing their relationship further, one that you really could have used. You don't elaborate as if it was literally just sex with no strings attached whatsoever, as if the main character doesn't care. Now, he is an idiot, as was made clear when he hid the book from his sister, but developed emotional attachment could make this story actually good.
There is potential, I'll give you that. If you take this down, work on it and upload it again, 15-20 pages so that people actually have personalities and emotions and the relationships aren't crap, this could become a very good one.
Anonymousover 3 years agoHuh. I was loving it until he made his sister forget and didn't tell her for months. That's actually where I am right now. I'm gonna finish the story out of respect for the actual skill here, and because you might fix this later.
TSreaderover 4 years agoI am so glad that I found this story! So well written, and so damn yummy too! Thank you!
bigmikey357about 5 years agoI love the story. Very good concept and it's plenty good enough for me to continue. However, you really needed an editor for this one, the errors were kinda throwing me out of the story. Good job anyway.
