All Comments on 'Spice of Transgression'

Not bad I enjoyed it,my wife and I don't seem to need these fantasys but whatever floats your boat, thanks.

Great descriptive quality! The flow was excellent, and it dripped verisimilitude. The little twist at the end was just twisty enough to be not wholly expected without dropping into Shyamalan territory. ;)

This was a well written story. I know some readers will accuse you of being predictable and the story is little over played on various sites around the net. But personally I liked it. And you did describe it very well. All in all a good story with a good fantasy. Well done sir.

Wow. I was reading a great story of infidelity, of a wife looking at finding her womanhood again because the husband was disinterested. (I'm in a relationship with a woman who is in a loveless, sexless marriage). I'm thinking about my own story, then out of the blue this hot story is revealed. It great to know that a married couple can find a way to spice up their sex life without cheating.

and see the diesel smoke, but there is a terrific exhilaration in seeing the train roaring downhill right at you, and you can't move to get out of the way, BUT you wrote it sooooo well that it still deserves top numbers!!!

A good ending that took me by surprise. Thanks

bought it. Had the possibility of being a real outing. Had it been me, though, there would have been a lot of foreplay dancing.

Lucky I had warning or this would have been something I would have avoided. I don't like the whole cheating on your partner thing. I don't have this fantasy or fetish or whatever, but I liked this a lot. The improvised bondage could have been a lot more, but It was great the way it was.....And the naming of the guy as Mr. Van Halen was cool, how did you know that's one of my favourite bands, Mr Sloppy. Once again, good story.

Very well written. I'm going to have to read more of your stories, in the near future.

Just like I like my bacon. Seriously, you ran me over with the well hidden climax. Well done!

At first I thought: "Oh, well, another cheating wife story". So the end "twist" was a happy surprise. Thanks.

Loved the twist at the end. Might have to try with my husband.

Well-crafted story with a fun twist at the end. Good use of language and imagery. You kept the pace of the story up-tempo which translated into a very Hot and Exciting Tale. Keep up the good work

Thank You! Can't wait to read more.

And some of the posted stories truly ARE awesome. This one is solidly ensconced in the awesome category! Thanks for a very fun AND erotic reading experience.

This story is ideal. It allows for some illicit sex between consenting strangers, living the fantasy and honoring marriage vows. Great story.

A husband and wife playing games together. Fun.

You had me fooled. I thought it was just another wife turns whore story. Good surprise, good story.

You succeeded on many levels. It was hot and nasty and kept my interest right to the last word.

The little twist at the end caught me by surprise although it really shouldn't have, but I was rushing along so fast I didn't have time to think about it.

Thanks!

R.

I enjoyed this. At a certain point in the bar I realized she was role playing with her husband. Still good.

Not sure where it dawned on me that it was hubby and wife but it didn’t spoil it for me, nice well thought out plot great characters and just so well paced.

Very well written... and an excellent story! Though, I kind of thought after the guy came in her ass, her husband would let himself in the room for his meeting... LOL

3 stars - I got it shortly after pump salesman left.

BEAUTIFUL