All Comments on 'Spoils of Victory'

Hope this story is continued!!

This must be the start of a beautiful weekend! We need more well-written stories from a master story teller.

AS ALREADY NOTED, THIS STORY CRIES FOR CONTINUATION. I MEAN, THERE'S A WHOLE WEEKEND TO FILL, PLUS THE NUDIST COLONY VISIT.

How could you end it here? Obviously you're just messing with us and have another installent on the way. I hope. Great job on this one!

I loved the introduction. I can hardly wait to read about the adventures at the nudist park. There's nothing quite as exciting as fuccking outdoors with strangers. I'll be looking for chapter II!

As everyone else has said, this is a wonderful start to a story that's full of sexual possibility between this couple. But, there also seems to be plenty of room to flesh out these characters by reliving the heated encounter that brought them together in the first place.

Although, I'm sure you've already thought of that.

Good Luck.

This has pre & post directions to go. Please look in both directions. Well Done!!!

I hope for more of this one. You are a top author.

those which have escapades into public nudity. Opps. This one didn't get there did it. That was just where my imagination was taking me (along with most of the other folks who commented). Yep. As much as I enjoy your stories Alex, and how you get to the point, so to speak. Sometimes I'd like to complete a longer read, one that really expands the situation. But then, most of the stories end that way. Finished with unanswered questions and possible situations yet to be explored. Well, I'm only in year 2004 and it is now almost 2012, so there may be more related stories ahead. I hope so. Thanks for this one, though. It was good.

I plan to read all of the "Spoils of Victory" episodes. I really enjoy this type of story.

Wish I was still able to enjoy all the actions portrayed in these episodes, used to have lots of fun, when younger. Keep writing, and hope you receive lots of good comments.

Will check rest of submissions and read all that grab my fancy.

oldman77

*****Short HOT and a fun entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.