All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 02'

A sex filled romp after my own heart. I especially loved the use of dialogue.

I am sure you have an idea of what will be SPRING BREAK 3

Ican see KATIE, LEAH, AND MELINDA IN A DAISY CHAIN LICKING EACHOTHER'S ASS. I AM WET ALLREADY.

possibly put more sex into it...geesh...I may not stop shaking for a week. Great job.

This story is so hot and so well written. I love the two ladies and can't wait to see how Katie takes all this.

You should do something with one guy on some sort of private island with a bunch of hot bisexual women

Great read, love the plot and characters,

still don't know "The Invisible man's" name

DKP

who is the guy having such a good time with Melinda and leah? it sure is not me and I am jealous

ron texas

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I like where this is going.

Wow!! I can't believe how fucking hot this is!! I love reading multi chapter stories that are already completed so I don't have to wait to see what happens. Thanks so much, HLD!!

5 stars. I'm enjoying the series. At first, there was the tension about Melinda possibly slapping Leah, then the tension of Melinda setting in motion a 3 way relationship, plus girl-girl greatness.. wow!

Vocab tip: On pg 1 you said she was an "aural lover". "aural" means 'relating to the ear or sense of hearing'. You may have meant vocal (relating to the human voice) and/or verbal (relating to the use of words). But I knew what you meant. It's all good.

The trap is set and sprung and the prey undoubtedly caught but what's next? Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.