All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 02'

Five stars. Some criticism is still warranted. Previously, you said that Linda and Julie (your wife) were college roommates for four years. Why did Julie and Linda not recognize each other when the introductions were being made? Poor move on your part overlooking this fact. Also several typos were evident and a few prepositions were missing at times. Good editing would help. But story was interesting and compelling.