All Comments on 'Spring Break Visit'

Either get a good editor who knows good basic grammar and will require or fix such in a story. The use of "word - word" is rotten bad grammar as either a coma or semi-colon are the likely choices. Where do all these authors keep appearing from who seem not to know this is wrong.

I have to agree as it could be a great story but with the grammar errors and all it takes away. I am one of the volunteer editors for this site so if you want help reach out and ask I am more then willing to help and I get them back fast.

Well written!

Waiting on the sequel...👍👍👍

Grammar Shrammar, it was still a great story!