by Mister_Shy
on the promise of the first chapter. An eager cat-and-mouse game of long-simmering lust and ambivalence. The dialogue crackles with subtext, the give-and-take of their forbidden coupling is sizzling hot, and the reader is left wondering just how high the stakes will go! Very well done!
I'm curious to see where you're going next. I like the interaction between the two characters. Well done.
that was one of the best stories i have read on this site and i have been reading from this site for a number of years
This is just too fucking good. The "love/hate" relationship between Courtney and the narrator is perfectly played out, always taut and full of tension, sexual and otherwise. I never can fully tell if Courtney is playing along because she wants to, she's being forced to, or because she really wants to but wants to feel like she's being forced to, or anything in between.
Please, PLEASE continue this. So long as she keeps getting blackmailed (but also secretly loving it), I'll keep reading. Too fucking hot.
I know it's been quite a while since you wrote this but is there any chance you'd pick this up again? This series is really one of the best things I've read on this site.
The conflict makes the sex so erotic
Some of those sickos writers should be locked up !!!!!
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This is one of my favorite stories not just on here but on the whole of the internet. Would really love to read more of your work.