All Comments on 'St. Valentine's Day Massacre Dance'

Congratulations, your story is not just sexy, but lots of fun to read. It's well written, full of tension and drama, and just downright entertaining. Five stars from me.

great combo here ... sexual adventure without being bawdy, crime, thugs, revenge, what else is there?

Why couldn't she move her arms at the end?

Why couldn't she move her hands in the end?

A great story. I enjoyed it a lot

Thanks for your comments. When Pauline was tied to the stake, supported by her arms, it put stress on the joints that makes it difficult if not impossible to move for the next few days because of the pain. I should have made that clear in the story. I'm glad you could overlook that weakness in your enjoyment of the story.

I read all your stories, and I see you tagged all of them with a "bottomless" tag. But there is no bottomlessness in any of your stories. What the H....?!