All Comments on 'Stacy's First Porno Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fucking hot dudes

what an ass fucking session. i loved it. would love to participate

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yeah

great, let us see how she gets more and more often

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Get an EDITOR or PROOFREADER

Love the story line but your spelling is awful! "Stating" is not the same as "starting" which is the word you intended. There are at least two instances of that along with lots of others - "shear" instead of "sheer" being one. Have someone proofread your story and correct misspelled words and improper tense use like using "Grinded" instead of "ground".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great ass fucking

Even better than part 1 - whole thing is great - love how they tell the sluts what they are going to do to them first and make them beg. Lots of detail - you don't miss a beat. Just wish it was on video. How about part 3 - let's see Stacy take double anal and double oral at the same time. And make it riskier - how about outside? Or maybe that 'nice' Brad can invite some nasty strangers home...

timm10827timm10827over 7 years ago

Totally hot story! I want a Stacy!

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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