All Comments on 'Stairway to Heaven Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
loved it!

please write more

one2manyone2manyalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the comment. Hope to have something new in about 2 weeks. Enjoy!

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
A good continuation

Sweety opted for the sub role and seems to be working out nicely in that position.

The entire story is a bit verbose, but it is clear, and I value clarity over brevity!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Will soon change

The loving wife will soon change. It is obvious that Dani wants to make Beth a submissive to her and some other man

one2manyone2manyalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Good Advice

Thanks Lickideesplit. My goal for the next story is to say more in fewer words. Thanks for reading my story and for feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

And so begins the start of a wonderful and fullfilling Cuckold and Submissive Bisexual story that will end with the husband out in the cold like all Cuckolds end up, alone. The woman the man once called a wife is no longer his. Divorce is the logical way forward.

one2manyone2manyalmost 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the tip, baranbrat. I'm working on the next chapter.

wryfanwryfanover 9 years ago
great fantasy/reality

It's is too bad that you haven't taken this to the next encounter...I wonder why! Consider it as we really enjoyed the story and the natural progression is so much more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good story but it really begs for another chapter! Or chapters.

Would Beth join Chuck and Dani for a threesome? With or without Adrian watching. Will the couples swap or have a free for all with all parties joining in? Will Chuck join up with Beth and Adrian for a threesome with Beth getting a DP? All kinds of possibilities here one2many.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

loveloverloveloverover 7 years ago
Sort of ....hot....

Built up nicely, then seem a bit forced. I got off somewhat on Beth's submissiveness, then it got to much, at least for me

OnethirdOnethirdover 7 years ago
Chapter 3

Dani is quite the experienced control freak. I'd love to read a chapter where Beth is introduced to Chuck, as we were led to expect.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Finally whore takes the step.

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