All Comments on 'Starting Anew'

by Pleasurewhore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The all or nothing with no safeword doesn't do it for me. It is the hallmark of the death of a relationship, not reaching some mythical greater level of D/s existence.

MastersWenchMastersWenchover 7 years ago
Loved it!

I love how easily you developed your characters. I could easily picture the scene going on. Very believable story too! Congratulations, and I really hope you'll write some more for us!

MastersWench xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic

it was so erotic, I was ready to cum

Rod_Steele01Rod_Steele01over 7 years ago
Bravo

Very well done. I like the perspective. the wondering if she could keep this up. Lovely job.

DarknessAscendingDarknessAscendingover 7 years ago
Wonderful

Great first story. You could feel the emotions and the pleasure. Hope to see more from this author!

unpublaauthorunpublaauthorover 7 years ago
Wonderful!

Wonderful!

CoranhornCoranhornover 7 years ago
Amazing

I love the point of view. I enjoyed this one the best of all that you have written.

Chromatic_KristyChromatic_Kristyover 7 years ago
10/10

Great story, I love the part where she's conflicted, not sure if she can keep it up. Seems almost like he asks just to illicit this response in her head.

BloodyIdiotBloodyIdiotabout 7 years ago
I wish I could give you a 10 out of 5 stars.

Amazing story, congratulations.

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