by MemberX
Pretty hot story. Liked the buildup, but it was sort of rushed at the end. Looking forward for additional chapters.
This isn't a complaint, just something I can't figure out: why do people favorite and un-favorite and favorite and un-favorite the same story? Is it supposed to send a message? Seriously, I can't even guess. Just seems like a lot of work for no benefit.
For that matter, why do people bother un-favorite stories and authors at all? It's not as if anybody runs out of room on their favorites list.