by MemberX
Are we going to have to another year for part 4?
Well written ,,, BUT ,,, you write well enuff to fill out your characters more completely. You write well enuff to get more than one page. As a person with experience with swapping it seems to me that you write as if you too have had a little experience, or at least thought it out to the small details. Just me making suggestions.
I know this diid't use to end on this cliffhanger.
I'm pretty sure Chapter 4 was the highest-rated of the parts when it was posted on my old account, but I was always dissatisfied with it -- so I want to work on it before I repost it.
In the meantime, Chapter 2 of the Saturday Game series has been uploaded and should be visible in a few days.