All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 03'

you've done it again. very good. she tends to argue alot with her self, and over think too. Sound like she is going to chang. Cant wait for the next one.

No quibbles. Keep it up! Great story!

i am not a homosexual but i had very much the same feelings and emotions as Helen, when i first became a sub/slave ... "What the hell was i doing? What am i getting myself into? All my upbringing and parental inhibitions were there. Whilst it must be very different for a "normal" person like Helen to admit they are becoming homosexual, i was prevously "normal" now i am a sub/slave. Well done Lisa Jones for dealing with the emoptions of a fictional character so well.

a very good story but you need to proof read. i saw a mistake where you messed up on the names but all in all a very interesting story

Helen needs to stop thinking about it and just let go. Great story! ~ L

this is getting better with each chapter. love the seduction, and obedience.