by zombie22
The author's profile says he has worked up the nerve to write. Well, this story is a wonderful start! I suggest he continue writing for all our sakes.
Hi I dont think you can end "Step Sister Seduction" here, such a good start to the story YOU must continue it
Ya ever hear of a piss douche? Or a bath in a bathtub filled with pee from both the guy and gal?
Raucous and erotic, you have a vivid imagination that you translated into a readable tale. But from a male viewpoint. Your own fantasy ???
Waiting to see where you go next.
I loved every word of that story, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter, as well as some totally different stories. if you can create any more stories of this quality I will be sure to read every one.
I too had a step sister that came into my life when I was in my late teens and early 20s. I want to hear more about these two.
I thought that this story was very well written. It encompassed alot of the fantasies that most men have but are reluctant to share. I cant wait until the next chapter comes along.
When is the sequel? My wife and I are ready for the next chapter.
man that was hot story good work can't wait to read the other chapters
good but think before you write you can't put shoulder length hair into a ponytail little goofs like this kill a story
the story was good until you added the TIE ME UP AND SPANK ME shit they have a seperate fetish catagory for that stuff so don't put it here.
again a good story ruined by adding BDSM keep it to one catagory. if you want to use BDSM post in that catagory, if you want to write about fetishes use that catagory, they have seperate catagories for a reason USE THEM PROPERLY PLEASE.
I love mixing the genres, the spanking panty ripping tieing up were excellent.
What a great perverted incestual love story, I can't wait to see where the storyline goes. Well written with great characters. 5 stars