by zombie22
I can't wait for chapter 3 to see what happens next.
You must continue this story. Make Vanessa OK and continue on, this is hot.
Please continue. This was fabulous chapter and i want to hear more about these two.
You are doing such a great job of making me, the reader, lose myself into this story. Keep up the good work!
I love the way this story is so unpredictable! This has beed the best I have read for being entertaining in not only a sexual way. Keep up the story!
I love how entertaining this story is in addition to being unbelievably hot. Please make sure that Vanessa is ok and that Bill and Jason's mom are okay with Jason and Vanessa's relationship. Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
If you leave us hanging without more you are not doing this great story any justice as you made us want to know how the school year would be then you throw us a cliffhanger. We are waiting!!!!!!!!!!
Please Continue... and please make her better. Great story!
Great story. Actual Character development. Keep the suprises coming
I'm not normally into the golden shower stuff, but it was hot and seemed to fit the characters. The relationships actually seemd grounded in some perverted reality.
I love this series so far. Talk about a boner kill at the end though!
Can't wait to read three, I hope she's alright.
If I wanted nothing but a stroke story I would go to a stroke story site. I really like your stuff. Good story.
U my friend are a horrible person XD , how could u end it like that !? I must say though this and the previos part was by far some great literacy
But damn. So mans crammed into only 2-3 pages. The racing was faster than a bullet train.