All Comments on 'Step Sister Seduction Ch. 02'

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noone269noone269about 20 years ago
Awesome Second Chapter.

I can't wait for chapter 3 to see what happens next.

Bil PotterBil Potterabout 20 years ago
More please

You must continue this story. Make Vanessa OK and continue on, this is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
GREAT!

Please continue. This was fabulous chapter and i want to hear more about these two.

DharwalDharwalabout 20 years ago
Excellent work.

Very nice cliffhanger, used to perfection.

ironsyde1997ironsyde1997about 20 years ago
Awesome story-teller!

You are doing such a great job of making me, the reader, lose myself into this story. Keep up the good work!

autoerotismautoerotismabout 20 years ago
You are doing a fantastic Job!

I love the way this story is so unpredictable! This has beed the best I have read for being entertaining in not only a sexual way. Keep up the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Amazing!!

I love how entertaining this story is in addition to being unbelievably hot. Please make sure that Vanessa is ok and that Bill and Jason's mom are okay with Jason and Vanessa's relationship. Can't wait for chapter 3!!!

BUICK GSBUICK GSabout 20 years ago
I KNOW THERE IS NORE TO CUM

If you leave us hanging without more you are not doing this great story any justice as you made us want to know how the school year would be then you throw us a cliffhanger. We are waiting!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
PLEASE KEEP GOING

Great story. Make her ok.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Pleaseeee!

Absolutely fantastic! You MUST continue your story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
One of the Best

Please Continue... and please make her better. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Awesome

Great story. Actual Character development. Keep the suprises coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I only have one word for this story

And the word is..... EXCELLENT.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sexy and wet!

I'm not normally into the golden shower stuff, but it was hot and seemed to fit the characters. The relationships actually seemd grounded in some perverted reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I love this series so far. Talk about a boner kill at the end though!

Can't wait to read three, I hope she's alright.

rabbit993rabbit993almost 11 years ago
Just fine

If I wanted nothing but a stroke story I would go to a stroke story site. I really like your stuff. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

U my friend are a horrible person XD , how could u end it like that !? I must say though this and the previos part was by far some great literacy

Sybaris_CaesarSybaris_Caesarover 5 years ago
Cute!

But damn. So mans crammed into only 2-3 pages. The racing was faster than a bullet train.

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