All Comments on 'Step Sister Seduction Ch. 03'

Thanks for all of the positive feedback. I have learned alot from my first submisions. I will do my best to try to be original and work on character development and realistic emotional content.

I hope you finish the story.

Not bad at all. Looking forward to the next submission...

Left opend ended enough for a sequel, but finished off that particular story. Nice and wet too!

Perfect ending and loved the emotion in it. Hope you post again.

There's nothing more taboo, and more kinky than a guy knocking up his step-sister.

Amazing story! I hope you write a sequel.

good series but the first chapter was a little unrealistic in that they fell for each other within hours of meeting for the first time it would have been more believable if you had them take it slow and slowly fall for each other over the whole summer the first chapter just felt rushed

When I read the part of the car prang, my heart literally leapt, not in a good way. Loved how it turned out. I must say I wouldn't be adverse to a possible sequel.

Great story.

I have been reading stories on this site for 3 years and this is the best one i have come across it plays with every emotion and makes you appreciate things for what they are keep writing these and you will be hearing from a publisher in no time

This is my very first comment in the five plus years I have been onthis site and by god you earned it this was beautifuly written and aninstant favorite

Very well done.

this needed atleast one more page to tell about them settling in the apartment and how they deal with the people at school.

I really enjoyed it, it was a bit different to some of the others on here, hot and sexy as well.

I really did enjoy it - thanks !

It would be great if you'd continue and tell of their life whilst at college together with Sarah.

But well worth 5 Stars for what you've written here !

Very good writing and well put together. Although i have no interest in the golden shower play it was none the less very erotic. You did a superb job on all three chapters. Thanks again for a very good story.

What a great love story, the storyline was perfect from the beginning where the two of them had a love at first sight moment, to the drama of the accident, to the emotional drama as their love started to evolve. At the end of the story, it was great to see both parents accepting their love with this love between them on tract for that happily ever after that this couple deserves. It would have been nice to have the story continue, but it ended well. This is what I consider a well written warm and loving story. Well done, 5 stars.