All Comments on 'Stepdaughter Gets Hers'

My ending was abrupt. I will do a part two and expand on the rap concert that took her from slut to full blown whore.

worst ending ever. stop writing you suck

Started out pretty well... but then he was suddenly an angry rapist.

The rest of the story was rushed.

I think if you took your time and did a rewrite, you could get somewhere with this.

The step-dad's entire personality flip was what was most off-putting for me.