All Comments on 'Steph's New Life Ch. 01'

by harveypotempkin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What?

A midwestern conservative girl did what? I know fiction calls on the reader to suspend disbelief sometimes but this story is so far away from reality that it really sucks. Sorry I wasted my time. Your sentence structure/grammar was fine. Just give us a story next time that is closer to reality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Work out the odds!!!

I really liked the story. I'm not sure why the previous Anonymous was so outraged. If you look at the numbers of girls submitting on sites like this, photo sites, etc, it DOES make sense that at least a few conservative girls from the midwest would embark on self-discovery including exhibitionism, and maybe even public sex.

I'd love to hear more, as I'm sure this relationship was going to continue to develop.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Looking forward to chapter 2

Great storyline, more please...

I've fucked in a changing room myself!

RecHikerRecHikerover 10 years ago
Daring -

I like the story line. Yes - "some" conservative girls from all over the country can and will cut loose right after they get out of mom and dad's house. I know some of them.

Thanks for sharing -

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I want Steph

I've done it with my girlfriend (now wife) in the lavatory of an airplane.You have got to try it ! So hot

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