All Comments on 'Steve and Erica'

Brought back some wonderful memories of a couple of teachers!

I enjoyed your 1st story in Lit and look forward to reading many more. Thank you for sharing it with us.

One of the best stories i have read in a long time. Look forward to more..

Well done for your first entry. Am looking forward to see what your next project is going to be.

Thanks for a fantastic story.

Great read. Perhaps a bit more attention to editing in your next submission.

A good story.

You need a proofreader/editor, mostly to catch the wrong words.

Thanks for the feedback, suggestions and encouragement. I'm glad that many of you have enjoyed the story. I am working on some additional stories and they should be out soon.

A beautiful, sensual and fun story. One comment on the age difference, my mother is 7 years older than my father. 45 years later their love is even stronger. It never made the slightest difference, and my mom will tell you with a wink, that it worked out just fine.

Finally a believable and passionate love story, with true feeling and joy. Sex was real- no 10 inch cock pounding a sopping wet pussy while 38 DDD boobs slapped his face. I wish more authors would follow your lead, reality is sometimes better than fantasy!! Not all time,but definitely occasionally.

I have developed a habit of going to the submissions list of an author who is new to me to check subjects, dates and scores, then read them as submitted to sort of see how they grow.

Very impressive. A great first read this morning. Thank you.

Now, i must get back to your list. It's going to be a great day.

Perfect is all Ican say

This is the perfect story I've ever read about romance between a teacher and a student. Reminds me of my grade 8 science teacher miss Anuradha Rajapaksa. I wish I could have an encounter like this with her..

It was so nice to go through the build up between Steve and Erica, knowing how it had to end. Descriptive elements were just right for the setting and tone of their relationship.

I really enjoy your stories. Very well written. Thank you.

I felt like Tina should have come back, and made a play for Steve...or Erica's ex should have come back, and got his ass kicked...

very nice little love story solid five

What a great May - December romance story. Well written and with the happily ever after it was perfect. Well done 5-stars

A GREAT romantic/sexy story. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!