All Comments on 'Stimulating Visit'

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YamiBoyYamiBoyover 3 years ago
^__^

What a fantastic story! I love it. It has been some time since your last update, but it was worth the way. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^

HarvesterusaHarvesterusaover 3 years ago
Great story

Looking forward to Evan going home

Harmar18Harmar18over 3 years ago
Brilliant

Great story will there be Part 2 that will include a 3some?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Welcome back! And with a damn meaty submission too!

larry74403larry74403over 3 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!

This was an incredible story.

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A wonderful story!

Wonderfully written and very yummy too. I would hope that this is followed up with more of this story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great!!!

What a naughty mommy 😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More

Do the Stimulating Visit II, the guy pays the mom's visit; with more anal commitment

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

One of the best stories here. So hot and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What a treat!!

I was worried at first that there wouldn't be any sex until the last couple of pages, but I was pleasantly surprised that they got into action much sooner. I enjoyed the mother and son intimacy, and the detailed descriptions of how much they enjoyed satisfying each other!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5 stars

The king returns. You are my favourite author on here and i have been lookin forward to reading another story written by you and it did not dissapoint.

Would love to see more m/s stories written by you with more reluctance from the mother.

HealingArtistHealingArtistover 3 years ago
Ended too abruptly.

While I appreciate the longer story format, it ends too abruptly and with so much that needs to be attended to between the two characters. The characters are very obviously not just a couple of porn actors in a short video. They are intelligent and sensitive, caring people. Writing about people who have more to offer than descriptions of their sex positions, requires time and thought. It would be a great read to have a complete long story of these two. There is clearly more at stake than just a transient fling for these two. Creativity is needed to weave a meaningful tale of love and more romance that leads to a long and deeply passionate role for Evan and Olivia. This was a story of something that was brewing inside of her for quite a while, and probably likely that he too was keeping repressed feelings of longing for his beautiful mother's charms and attributes. Too many stories on this site are reduced to cheap trashy porn sessions that drop out of existence after the lengthy build-up to the sex. Sex without thought and meaning too often as it turns out. Life is worth a good read and people who we read about should be more dimensional than the pulp crap that is seen here a lot. Give us more, soon? Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
amazing read

Best read so far, hot and steaming plot, would like to see how Evan handle affair with his mom at home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story but.

Great story but no man who gets to fuck his mother could b such a pussy.man up.the first time I fucked my mother there was no guilt or anything.we ravaged each other and still do 25 years later.he just needs to take her as his.good story though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
!

Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot

Wow! Very hot story. The description of the anal was amazing and really is my hottest fantasy. You rocked my world!

twogr8handstwogr8handsover 3 years ago
Great job

I hope that you are not done with these two characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.

SonForBBWSonForBBWover 3 years ago

Really great. So well-developed with lots of hot scenes throughout.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Exceptional Writing

A very hot story with some amazing sex. A couple of spelling mistakes and you said Jacob instead of Evan once. I would love you to continue this one with a visit home and maybe his sister is there a well.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Some of the dialogues was a little stunted/staccato, but the plot was solid and great sex scenes. I'm hoping for another part or two... Maybe he does meet "that" girl, adventures at home, etc.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 3 years ago

Hot story. What a sexy mum he has. Never mind the yoga studio girls I think it would be hotter if you brought his sister into the mix. Maybe sis will move in and they can make babies.

Cunninglinguist97Cunninglinguist97over 3 years ago

Idea for a sequel, have the mom call in sis because she thinks he is falling back in to his rut and can't get away at the time

pacificpacificover 3 years ago
Great story.

I always enjoy the longer stories that build up the characters. Thanks. 5 stars and a favorite author sub.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is indeed Stimulating!!

Continuity is not needed, as requested by most of your fans, imo. Pls give us more!

FamilyGuy1963FamilyGuy1963over 3 years ago

Excellent story - slow build to the action but once there - hot.

Looking forward to another episode soon.

5***** Favourited

ManoBlueManoBlueover 3 years ago

I like the writing but I disliked the story because I disliked Evan! He as a miserable character to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great atory

This was great. Different dynamics from your other stories but I really enjoyed it.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

I guess Evan took after his father.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Olivia

What an amazing Mom/lover she is, so loving and devoted. The way she will do anything to please Evan is great. The part in the shower really hit on the roller coaster of emotions and Evan had the ultimate high. Being gently washed by his loving sweet mother and then getting to say all those nasty things while he fucks her and makes her his whore. I can only imagine what that orgasm in that moment would feel like....so unbelievably dirty and hot, the absolute ultimate. Thanks for putting that fantasy into words so well. ☺️

Tony StrokesTony Strokesabout 3 years ago

An excellent story, I truly didn't expect to enjoy this story as much as I did. You did a wonderful job building up the characters and expressing the right amount of emotions between the two characters. Olivia really seems a caring and dutiful mother, and truly wants the best for her son, even if it makes him uncomfortable. I did not care for the implied bias she showed toward his sister early in the first page. Here's her son going through a harsh divorce, why is his sister not required to call him? Why is she not supposed to display more of an interest in her brother's life? Her relationship does seem to be thriving after all.

Evan also loves his mother, but she's exactly right in that he overthinks things way too much, to the point that he can't seemingly be honest with himself, or her. He could really stand to loosen up, and not care so much what random strangers think of him and just live his life. Moreover, he really needs to be honest w/ both himself and his Mom, and just tell her that he's grown to love as more than just his mother. As it's obvious he does, and she doesn't seem like she would be opposed to it.

I'm really hoping we get to see a second part to this story, these two characters really deserve it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It is indeed STIMULATING, for me!

Is part 2 on the way??

My goto story for a quick cum!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Out fucking standing! It was like you lived my life.

a_reader_from_germanya_reader_from_germanyover 2 years ago

Evan's inner conflicts and struggles made this story believable. I think the somewhat realistic approach just made their encounters hotter. The same goes for Evan realizing something developing beyond both a son's love and his lust for a sensual and voluptuous woman, who happens to be his mom. Still, we can't be sure of mom's feelings, we got some hints regarding mutual romantic sentiments, but they are vague. Mom implicating they could play at three in the future ends the story on a rather sex oriented note- not my favourite outcome. But anyhow, it was a great read, I'm off to exploring the author's other stories. 5 stars for this one without a second thought.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’ll love to see a continuation! Bravo!!

DarkForeverDarkForeveralmost 2 years ago

Waiting for next part.

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 2 years ago

Good story, I hope you continue on with it there’s so much more you can do to this storyline. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MelwinsMelwinsover 1 year ago

This story is begging for a part two

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Long story for just a fuck and suck with Mom!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Olivia is a great mother. She really will

Do anything for Evan and that is so sweet. I especially liked the different types of sex they had and how it played to his fantasies. The part in the shower when he could really open up and call her a whore was super hot and very realistic as to a kinky fantasy. Great job

englishnospeakenglishnospeak10 months ago

Awesome story, but the ending's a bit of a cliffhanger. You should write another chapter, bring in the sister, and dive into her and have a threesome

funtime581funtime5819 months ago

I enjoyed the story overall, it definitely had its hot moments. However.

That inner turmoil of his made me just about give up on this around halfway through. At first it was expected it needed that too make it believable, but after a while, my god... Does he wanna do this or not? She's fine with it, and enjoys it, so let's start to get around to him embracing the idea. A few more paragraphs, and there he is waffling again, beating himself up. It took until nearly the end for him to do an utterly instant 180, seemingly between one sentence and the next, and suddenly, he's... What? A Dom? Into rough sex? The hot parts were hot enough to keep me with it, but in general, the son was indecisive, reluctant and unlikable enough for me to take a pass on any sequel that might come out of this. The writing, grammar and style are right on, it was simply the character that was killing it for me.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Needs another chapter. Great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Lengthy but well written. I easily gave it a five because mom had pussy hair!

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