All Comments on 'Storm Damage Ch. 03'

sorry to disappoint you, but this story deteriorates. The sex scenes are repetitive, the girls have no real identity, they seem like masturbatory tools. Casual sex is fine, "two down - one to go" just dosen't make up with the "love" thing. Don't try to force it in or change the course. You just make him appear shallow this way. Where to go from here, have him starting a harem? Better pop in some blue pills soon, he'll have a hard time trying to satisfy the three of them. Maybe the latinas reappear too? Or take him to greener pastures, he could find a sexy undertaker to fuck befor he falls into the coffin? Well that would make his late wife proud of him,wouldn't it?

This chapter seemed a bit rushed. I like the idea of the relationship with Tina but why does her sister have to fall in love with him also? It doesn't seem to fit the story hopefully chapter 4 will be a lot better.

I look forward to reading more of this story, I liked it ALOT.

When is chapter 4 coming out?

A minor thing that causes reading to slow down. Please learn where to use lay and lie. Hens lay eggs, you lie on the bed.

Wow. This guy can be talked into just about anything.

Two down, one to go by the look of it so far. Well, it is in erotic couplings so what can I expect.