by Daniellekitten
*shivering* ahhh... ooh so naughty. Loved it.
Thanks again, DK, for your writing skills.
J. (The Poor Ol' Retired Cop)
One of the better stories I've come across (excuse the pun) for quite some time. Well done Danielle, you're a very talented writer
Yes, this is something that can so easily happen, given the circumstances. Well written.
It's really amazing what a scary situation does to people . All of a sudden the seemingly impossible becomes reality . Nice work .
Don't normally like incest stories but this was nice. I love the intensity of storms too.
nothing in this story screamed believability. i think the nature of the situation, the last thing they would be focusing on is sex. i seriously doubt at the drop of the hat they decide, 'tornado is ripping the house apart, lets fuck.' i'm also not keen on her being unconcerning about unprotected sex.
i'm sorry but this whole submission is an Epic Fail.
I'm sure glad there was a nice warm port to slide into during the perfect storm!
While incest stories usually do not appeal to me (they sicken me most of the time), DK's gift for words allowed this story to transcend the others and excite me, something I never thought an incest story could do!
"Storm Tossed Siblings" was an intense story. You picked a great place to end it. Wow, I was actually in the storm! Great writing!
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!!
I still can't seem to get the webmaster to allow my membership. It's been several years now.
Chuck McConnell
I hate it when people criticize a story for not being "realistic." It's fiction, it's not real. Probably well over half of the stories on this site aren't realistic. Sometimes the absurdity of it makes it a fun story. I see what you were going for - a storm was raging outside while one was raging inside.
A couple of things may have been worded better and an editor may have helped with that. But overall, I liked your descriptions and thoroughly enjoyed the story. Thumbs up, and I can't wait for the movie.
if the story doesn't make you say yeah i can see that happening or i believe it happened then the writer FAILED. if you want to read unbelievable stories there is a fantasy, sci-fi and nonhuman area. in this area it better be believable or it's in the wrong area.
This story definitely could do with a follow up chapter, it ends okay as is but there are a lot of unanswerred quetions....
There is nothing wrong with the story as is, it's just that it could be continued.....
Ole Momma Nature does have the ability to release enormous passions doesn't she in both the weather and siblings.
I could just imagine how the storm must have switched them right on.
I found another hyper-intelligent porn-writer!!! Why it still gets me so excited, fuck only knows. You get the dumb chops who can't formulate a story despite the grandiose and perfectly groomed grammar, you get...oh you know all of 'em - and then you get those that can make a sexual experience turn into a all-consuming adventure - so good you'll never want to watch TV again; what would be the use if you could be reading or searching for the next really good shit again? And it looks like this writer has been busy. Thank you for putting so much work and love into this story - it is a masterpiece.