All Comments on 'Stormy Night Ch. 02'

I'm kinda interested in where this is headed. It seems they are afraid to tell thier parents, possible confrontation angle in the next chapter? I just hope its not the standard family fun for all angle, where they are all cool with things and they all have a family orgy. I'd like to see a confrontation with the parents leading to them either being forced out or walking out and rebelling against their parents. not to use a silly pun or anything but with the undertone being 'stormy', this is sets up a perfect storm of unforseen events. So far i like the pace of the story.

good start please keep it going but please keep the group family sex out of it that is a total turn off maybe the parents could be siblings or cousins keep up the good work and finish it

Wonderful story. Pl do write more.

it seems you are like 90% of the usless writers here and can't finish a story to bad it was good as far as it went i should have known as you didn't finish your story "LOVE POTION" either what a waste of time

Definitely enjoyable. I don't know if my comment will make a difference but let it be encouragement for future installments. Cheers.

This actually made me pretty emotional. Not many stories around here manage to do that. Good job.

Beautiful. These two must stay together forever. This is true love.

Both chapters blended well into a really nice story.. I always wished for a sister, not for the sex reason, which would have been nice, but as a different companion instead of the two brothers. Well written, no humongous cock, large tennis sized balls, or an overly juicy, squirting pussy. Hopefully you will do follow up stories. The trials that Jason and Jessica may have as they progress with their relationship. May your future submissions be great................. dirtyharry

I been reading bro and sis stories make mom and dad as twins also sooo go from there

Been a long wait for Part 3..

Surely if Jessica planned this out so well she should have planned for that. Waiting on Chapter 3.

The excitement is building. love to read more please

The fuckers either dead or forgot his password😂😂😂