by blackrandl1958
Well constructed, excellent pacing and great characterizations.
Well done.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this tale. So many stories here are hurried along to get to the sex that they are not readable. You did an amazing job with character development and story line. This is the first story of yours I've read. It will be the first of many now. I'd love to read another chapter for selfish reasons but realize this may not need a part 2. Well done Randi!
I guess I missed this before. Very sweet. I’m happy to see these gems reposted.*****
read this when it was posted before, and it was well worth reading again.
Superb effort. It should be continued. Further exploits of Sam could make for some quality reading!
I was falling in love with Samantha along with the guy in the story. You write so well and with so much feeling and heart. Thank you for bringing this story back.
R.
This may be the best written and most exotic story I’ve read in ages.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
I’m having a log in issue,btw.
ansdguy
Long time ago I was married to a twin and her sister used to stay with us. She used to jump in bed with us to watch TV and that was all. Even that I wished to make love to my sister in law, it never came around. Both were extremely beautiful.
Such is life!
Yes, such a well written story. You know how to setup the characters and develop the theme and characters just like in real life among men and women. Your theme made it so hot, I was so hard through it all. I like the situation of Ann creating a reason for her hubby going to stay with Samantha and having the opportunity not just as a one time event to go develop a new relationship with her sister. That he was encouraged to make out, screw her as much as she would allow him to do. That Ann wanted them to develop a sexual relationship with her sister too and that Samantha admitted to wanting that too. So hot with Sam and Ann's hubby to screw like rabbits and bring Sam out of her shell. Yes, please more as this develops about now telling us what the sisters do, how hot they get and how hard they cum for each other. Plus hubby can screw them both and let things get as nasty as the girls want. Cannot wait for more, thank you so much.
It was not a blizzard but we were together for one day and it all happened cause she needed someone to really love her. It happened and it was great!
Thrilled to find you on this site too...loved you for years!
A lovely erotic story and well written and we do need to have more from this author
Gotta love fantasy stories, woot woot!! Fucks her super tight virgin pussy all evening, then four times thru the night, then again in the morning before she finally complains about being sore! Rofl!! I have sex with my wife, with lube, for an hour, slow and gentle making love mixed with hard pounding fucking, for upwards of an hour, and she is complaining that she's sore. I love my wife, but she certainly never had a super tight pussy, lol. Nice and snug on a good day. Sigh.
Gotta love fantasy AND being young, hehehe!
If this is a true story then you are by far without even the slightest hint of a doubt the luckiest man in the world.
What an amazing reward for agreeing to thaw the ice maiden - two gorgeous women to fuck and the added joy of watching them making love, which must be a voyeur’s dream.
Friends asked Sam why she is so much happier lately.
"I've been seeing a pychiatrist!"
I have known cousins that want to be with me just like the sisters in the story. Keep up the writing. how about a second , third and forth story? Do not stop I am a man that is in the silver years of my life, these stories keep me alive. Many thanks.
You know how to make this story believable and so erotic, next I have to read more about stranded.
Had you not mentioned that he hadn’t had sex with anyone but his wife for 15 years I wouldn’t have said anything. You said Sam was 25 and the wife was 3 years older. He obviously hadn’t been been having sex with her that long. If you feel the need for hard facts in a story you have to make sure they’re legit or they confuse the reader.
Strange how I have commented on more of your stories than anyone else’s. I don’t think it’s a bad thing. I see things in everything I read just never bothered to say anything. I must like you lol!!
Very most Excellent Randi
Erotic and a fun read. Thanks so much. KUDOS BIG TIME!!!
i absolutely loved , loved , loved ! this story , erotic , sexy , always romantic too !
another thing i love about your stories , is that i have re read most all them , and they are better the second time around!! still five stars !!****** thanks again!! *****
Hi Randi.
I'm... I'm... I'm repeating myself about the quality of your stories, but that's OK. I like to tell people that I love what they do when they do it right. This story is also worth two rating scales one after the other. Excellent writing. You showed us again the extent of the total quality you are capable of ,,, with no loose ends. Thx.
BJ
Very nice story, pitty there arnt enough "loving" families around. Its wasy to tell you are an acomplished writer, descriptions and backgrounds and the length was perfect.
Too bad both of their birth control didn't fail and Sam had twins. The babies wouldn't starve, mommy has big milk containers...
sharing can be good. However, the anon trolls would scream "cuck", if it was the other way around
Another great story. I love hot stories where no one is hurt. Great tale!
Bill S.
2days in a row reading this just as hot the second time through. One of the best on Literotica.
Bit S.
A man taking good care of his sister-in-law, as it should be! Sisters belong together, after all. It just takes the right guy to keep them both satisfied!
True story...memory brought back by this story.
SNL was a bit of an ice queen sexually. She is three years younger than my wife. Spent the night at her house as my wife and I were living out of state and I had a business meeting back in our home town. She starting talking about her relationship at the time, her reluctance and jealousy. Turns out her reluctance sexually was all about a lack of knowledge and confidence in her body and skills. BTW, this was pre-internet. So, questions asked, answered, sexual acts explicitly explored verbally, sort of how, why, etc. but she still didn't believe she could get physically responsive. It's now after midnight, just a lamp on in the room, sitting next to her I finally took it to the next level. Leaning into her I told her, you KNOW whether your pussy is wet from all this talking and while saying that I reached out and ran a finger over the crotch of her shorts pressing against her pussy. Yes, it was wet, and while doing that she moaned and leaned toward me as if to receive a kiss. I gave her a quick peck on the lips, told her, still pressing against a now moving pussy, that if I wasn't married to her sister I would love to take her right then and there. Nothing more said and after a few moments we stood up and embraced and she pressed herself into my hardon. Looked up at me and told me she would never tell...but...I didn't trust this immature young woman so I just sighed and said I wish it were different.
No, we never did fuck and did I do the right thing that night? Damn straight I did. My fnl let himself into the house the next morning, they owned the house but weren't living there, while we were both still sleeping...in separate beds.
Amazing story but it ended too early. Why not describe the sister's first experience together? It is the most erotic thing you've ever seen and yet you don't give any details...a wasted opportunity imo. I still give 5 stars because it is a story about love.
This will sound weird but that story seems like it's over but ti could also have a second or even a third part. Like Trace could get both woman pregnant with siblings and cousins.
Very good story, I read it 3 times already. Only the last part is too fast. The last part where Anna and how the future goes could have been a page long, instead of 1 paragraph. Also living together in the future would have been a nice ending.
But having said that, still 5 stars.
Why not just make it a 3 way relationship between them where while he is legally married to ann but where Samantha is his wife in all there eyes as well basically a pollymary relationship
The buildup, the relationship between Trace & Samantha is sweet and real and hot. The ending was super rushed, though, and it sure felt more like Samantha should've moved in with them after the emotions they all shared. Still, 5*, but would've been even more amazing if you'd stuck the landing.
Good story, but thought Sam gave up just a little to quickly. Oh well, all's well that ends well. And it did end well . . . .
What compassion has Dr. Ann to bribe her loyal psychiatrist husband to physically seduce her kid sister and unblock her fear of intimacy. Without rape the 'therapy' actually works, like playboy after dark... Just wait until the shrink has kids with the sisters.