by Choronzonxx
Enjoyed the story premise. A bit more build-up and some extended foreplay description would make the story much better. Hot fast sex is great but drawing it out longer and with more detail will enhance it so much more...
Thanks
A wham-bam thank you mam quickie of a story. You can leave it at that or expand on it and take your time to develop the characters and make it a more sensual story. The ball is in your court.