All Comments on 'Strapped Tight Ch. 01'

tease was too lonnnng.

love the scenario! have been bound before but always spread eagle, need to try it this way with a hot top like this guy!

THIS is EROTICA...after the tease, the slow build and the method and then comes the pay-off...and again. Not too long but just pitch perfect. Descriptive language, use of active tenses, paying attention the psyche of both parties, the atmosphere, the element of danger, the possibility of going too far and the pleasant surprise of a mutual adventurist. In one singular paragraph, the sr71plt deploys the word cock four times, each use like a rhythmic thrust, the words pressing, covering and squeezing lubing up the action until climax and yet- like Mozart, he can't quite end until he's well and truly explored the last element of emotion. This is how to write like a master.

Was rock hard reading this

I always find myself coming back to this exciting story! Thanks!