All Comments on 'Strays'

Not withstanding the five repetitions, you dropped from five to three stars due to the grammatical errors and typos. The use of "to" when "too" is needed and a couple of spelling errors (typos?) caused the drop.

You are still one of my favorite authors.

de Jay

I thought this was an excellent start. Please continue.

I am hooked by your characters and their intertwined stories.

Would you please add the next chapter?

deJay_13, we give points based on the quality of the writing. We don’t subtract any points for bad grammar or spelling. There are far too many crap stories on this site which have no grammar or spelling mistakes. These crap authors think that their crap stories don’t sink! This story is very well written. You as a commenter do not have the right to be their English teacher and critique their written work. Just read the story and enjoy it!

This was a very pleasing trilogy. The bully redemption was written well and believable, in both stories. Cuddles was outstanding. I'm surprised there was no further interaction with Mary's parents but i guess it wasn't strictly needed for the story.

nice, liked it a lot 5 stars