by coaster2
I love your stories... you are getting better plots... i love it 5 stars...10 times over
I wondered if and when the possibility of a transition to original music would hint at the elevation of the group's stature beyond a cover band. Olivia's entrance into the story was nice, if not surprising. Gina's revelation of her past gave her character greater depth and humanity. Engaging plot - l look forward to the next chapter. Thanks once again.
Nice Romance though I would still have preferred his marrying his street find.
You are a good writer . What you lack in your stories is everyday things . People relate to these things . What you are showing here is just a bit cringy . But I really liked reading your stories . And I hope you continue it
Bad gene pool , stay away , You will see what's it's like to be married to the female version of the devil > passed on to your children . You will lose your wings this time around and your grandmother hope and care. runnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ! Very bad choices hang yourself might be an option.
So the slut Gina ran.....as I said earlier these are two inconsiderate ungrateful BITCH SISTERS!!
ED IS WEAK WIMPY DESPERATE CUCK!!
ED IS PUSSY-WHIPPED BY BOTH SISTERS!!