All Comments on 'Street Find Ch. 07-08'

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Flymaster60Flymaster60almost 7 years ago
Great job

I love your stories... you are getting better plots... i love it 5 stars...10 times over

johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 7 years ago
Plot twists and character elaborations

I wondered if and when the possibility of a transition to original music would hint at the elevation of the group's stature beyond a cover band. Olivia's entrance into the story was nice, if not surprising. Gina's revelation of her past gave her character greater depth and humanity. Engaging plot - l look forward to the next chapter. Thanks once again.

bruce22bruce22almost 7 years ago
Soothing Music on our ears...

Nice Romance though I would still have preferred his marrying his street find.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
double dose

of drama

Sherlock0903Sherlock0903about 4 years ago
Well done

You are a good writer . What you lack in your stories is everyday things . People relate to these things . What you are showing here is just a bit cringy . But I really liked reading your stories . And I hope you continue it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Bad gene pool , stay away , You will see what's it's like to be married to the female version of the devil > passed on to your children . You will lose your wings this time around and your grandmother hope and care. runnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ! Very bad choices hang yourself might be an option.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So the slut Gina ran.....as I said earlier these are two inconsiderate ungrateful BITCH SISTERS!!

ED IS WEAK WIMPY DESPERATE CUCK!!

ED IS PUSSY-WHIPPED BY BOTH SISTERS!!

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