by Domwoolf
nicely written (except for the wrong word four word which I won't mention so as not to be thought of as anal). Liked the story---you bothered to differentiate the characters and give details (the breakfast and the coffee) that help make the story real enough to be almost believable. Could have used some more description of the sexual episodes. I am not sure your story is really a nonconsent/reluctant tale though; both Denise and Blaze seem too pleased with the situation from the very outset. (I realize that categories are often tough. There ought to be one marked Teacher/Pupil(s). Anyway. I did enjoy your story. Ready to read more of your work now.
ILienBagby
Definately a lot more more material in a school year to write about.
don't forget a Spring Break chapter or two.
I guess our genius has figured out that sharing with da bros is not going to happen. 5
Just my five cents, but I think the story would be better if there was more resistence to the idea on the part of the teachers. Having them be reluctant then over time finding that they are enjoying themselves would make the story much hotter.