All Comments on 'Strip Poker'

Better than good. Enjoyed the read. Five stars for sure.

not bad, but not the best... there's a lot more to this story i think that coudl be explored in further chapters.

Nice babysitting :)

It was 3am and I left a comment on another story saying I like it even though it was not my kind of story. This is the story I meant.

Laptopwriter got something right, his stupidity

It has potential but it was too unrealistic.

wishful thinking

Clearly a bloke writing it.

I know you ARE a bloke, but it really comes across in the writing - you unfortunately failed to capture any sort of female bent.

Apart from that, fine.

The flow of this story caught me completely off guard. It just doesn't make any sense. The first "penalty" is off the grid, and would never happen in a real-life situation. Of all of Ashson's stories that I've read, this is clearly the worst. I didn't vote, but if I did, it would get a 1*.

excellent story, I would have preferred more detail on Meredith sripping down but oh well, 5/5

He would have raped her if she hadn't played.