by HardTimmy
Please tell me that there are more chapters to this story. Loved, loved, loved it!!
Absolutely amazing story! Please write another chapter. Maybe you would like to explore what happens when Pete and Ash come home from the cabin :)
Good, fun story with nice pacing and some neat twists. Had me wondering from the get go with the blindfolds if Ash was the one playing with Pete, but kept me guessing. Only criticism is the end scene after everyone goes to bed was very quick, could have used some more sexy details between the two.
Looking forward to a part 2 if there is one!
Can't wait to see more between Pete and his sis. The unisex names had me a bit confused at points but overall hot and sweet.
Intelligent, fun, realistic, efficient and quite hot, Thank you (spike)
Great story. Just got hotter and hotter as it went along. By the way I'm glad at least one of the girls didn't have a shaved pussy.
This was hot. And written well. Still, there were some editing mistakes that might have been caught by an editor.
This was a great story..... Would love to see it go into extra chapters......
You have got to write another chapter, it is just too much to leave this story where you have. You've started a very hot tale, you must tell us how the following day develops. So many stories on here are never finished properly, please don't let this be another one! The anticipation of what happened the following morning is growing already. So come on, you know you want to........!
this story was an awesome turn on, still rubbing precum on my cockhead as I write this, continue the story of rest of the weekend, would love to see Mark fuck ash as her brother assists putting mark's cock in his sisters' pussy
I loved this! And I would love for u to write more about ur relationship with your sister
Ready to fuck now, please write more ohmygoddddddffduhghuidvtydrdawehfhvyyrdd, sorry, orgasm ☺️
What a great, sexy, hot story....could this be based on real events???
I loved the story--the idea of close siblings having a wild time with a group of close mutual friends, where anything goes. Incestuous sex without the need to hide it!
On the other had, I really wish you'd taken the time to polish the story and flesh it out a bit. I got a general sense of your characters. I just would've liked to see... more.
And, yeah, I agree with the posters who felt the final scene with the siblings in bed together was much too short.
Well written,. I enjoyed it. This story is worth expanding to tell about the rest of the weekend. All kinds of possibilities.