All Comments on 'Strip Poker with Sister'

by HardTimmy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Chapter 2????

Please tell me that there are more chapters to this story. Loved, loved, loved it!!

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 9 years ago
Not bad

Good story . Hope you do part 2 .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic

Absolutely amazing story! Please write another chapter. Maybe you would like to explore what happens when Pete and Ash come home from the cabin :)

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Terrific

Really good story. You have a very vivid imagination.

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

they all remained with the person they slept with right?

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 9 years ago
I fell asleep

At the end of the first page. Boring as fuck.

BreakTheBarBreakTheBarover 9 years ago
Good Story

Good, fun story with nice pacing and some neat twists. Had me wondering from the get go with the blindfolds if Ash was the one playing with Pete, but kept me guessing. Only criticism is the end scene after everyone goes to bed was very quick, could have used some more sexy details between the two.

Looking forward to a part 2 if there is one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

come on another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

Pls do more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So hawt!

Need pt2, no swapping.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Waiting on part 2 as well

I need a cigarette after that.

islandicislandicover 9 years ago
Nice

Nice story line. Nice beginning.......................

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fun times

Can't wait to see more between Pete and his sis. The unisex names had me a bit confused at points but overall hot and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!

Wish I had a hot sis like Ash!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
High class entertainment

Intelligent, fun, realistic, efficient and quite hot, Thank you (spike)

TavernerTavernerover 9 years ago
One of the best

Great story. Just got hotter and hotter as it went along. By the way I'm glad at least one of the girls didn't have a shaved pussy.

malloystermalloysterover 9 years ago
Five stars!

This was hot. And written well. Still, there were some editing mistakes that might have been caught by an editor.

MeltnmoldMeltnmoldover 9 years ago
HOT! HOT! HOT!

This was a great story..... Would love to see it go into extra chapters......

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Cheaper 2 : The morning after the night before .....

You have got to write another chapter, it is just too much to leave this story where you have. You've started a very hot tale, you must tell us how the following day develops. So many stories on here are never finished properly, please don't let this be another one! The anticipation of what happened the following morning is growing already. So come on, you know you want to........!

vikinglord1973vikinglord1973over 9 years ago
OMG

you cant leave it at that you have to write more

debaucherdebaucherabout 9 years ago

Hot as hell and just the perfect length. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
still rubbing my cock

this story was an awesome turn on, still rubbing precum on my cockhead as I write this, continue the story of rest of the weekend, would love to see Mark fuck ash as her brother assists putting mark's cock in his sisters' pussy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wished

Animation about it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Awesome. Short yet beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I loved this

I loved this! And I would love for u to write more about ur relationship with your sister

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it, so wet

Ready to fuck now, please write more ohmygoddddddffduhghuidvtydrdawehfhvyyrdd, sorry, orgasm ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Extremely well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

What a great, sexy, hot story....could this be based on real events???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Damn fine work

This is one of the best things I have ever read!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Holy Hell

This story was incredible. I couldn't stop reading

camstevens33camstevens33almost 7 years ago
Good story... but could be great

I loved the story--the idea of close siblings having a wild time with a group of close mutual friends, where anything goes. Incestuous sex without the need to hide it!

On the other had, I really wish you'd taken the time to polish the story and flesh it out a bit. I got a general sense of your characters. I just would've liked to see... more.

And, yeah, I agree with the posters who felt the final scene with the siblings in bed together was much too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So hot!

Im generally not into this, but this WAS HOT! Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pretty Hot Story

Well written,. I enjoyed it. This story is worth expanding to tell about the rest of the weekend. All kinds of possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best strip poker story I can remember reading. Great job. Hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Any chance of getting a threesome with Pete, Ashley and Mel

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