by leo_thedirewolf
Loved it! I never experienced anything like this; but, you make it sound so good. I'm very weak, submissive and attracted to dominant guys, so I would probably enjoy it very much.
"You're a fag. You're ruined." So, so good. Beautifully, wonderfully, INCREDIBLY hot writing!!
So so incredibly hot…I want to be ruined like that right now….I just need my incredibly perfect straight life to be destroyed by a relentless, scheming dominant top…
The story felt like there were holes, like it was missing something. Also, it felt like it was written by a high schooler.
A straight guy turned into a fag by his two, stronger friends! Daniel's cocky attitude and strength is such a turn on! After reading that Mika was dominated by Daniel, I didn't expect Mika to be similar to Daniel, by making the writer his cocksucker! Then both stronger guys had their way with the weaker one! I would be so scared, but as the weaker one, what could I do ! ?