All Comments on 'Student Teacher Ch. 05'

Between your updates of this and Two Teachers, you're on an incredible roll. Know you have another fan out there, and they love your work.

Hot... Hot... HOT!!!!

Thanks for finishing this great story.

That was an incredible story! It was completely worth the wait! You have a great style. The only way it could have been better would be if it didn't have to end.

It was great to see a conclusion. FANTASTIC story. And everyone ends up living happily ever after.

Really a fun read

awesome story!! Love how helpless Jessie is.

Several times I noticed you used the letters "learnt". There is no such word. The correct word is " learned". At times I felt I was reading something a 10-year-old had written. I would not encourage you to write anything else unless you find a very good editor. And your story content was comical. Was it meant to be a satyrical comedy?

I know the story is not "recent", but it merits another chapter.

Would love to read more

You definitely have a talent. Keep up the good work. I hope Jessie can live up to Ben's expectations and keep him satisfied. Paula should continue in her 'dress up role' with Jessie as a submissive. Thanks allot !!!

Submission/humiliation is one thing. Holding a person hostage is an other. Thanks for not continuing this or try a different story thread.

In real life hostage taking is terrible, the ruination of a family and as well as the captive. The story is fantasy with scenes sometimes wedged in to make other scenes fit together. For me submission and humiliation is a terrible thing, but should be talked about, especially when in the form of bullying in school, or even in the office. Hopefully my stories are an escape route for such emotions and ideas. Murder or any sort of killing is terrible, whether by the state or anyone else. In fiction it is an outlet for such thoughts without anyone resorting to action and making it a fact. Just read these stories for pleasure and don't take them too seriously.

I would of loved to read more of Jenny and the teacher coming back for seconds in the closet.