All Comments on 'Succubus Pt. 02'

You have to finish this...

My own preference would be to avoid the incest angle. But I look forward to wherever you are going with this. Thanks.

This is a fantastic story and I absolutely love it. It’s well written, although there has not been any futa yet but I’m very excited please continue this story!

Please write more. But please make her shock very big whe she draws The Lady to her.

Well written, could use a little more proofreading. It's intriguing and very erotic. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting.

I second what others have said. You have such a lovely attention to detail. Regardless of whether the sentence/paragraph is sexual or not, it feels charged with anticipation. I hope you return to this story, provided you're still invested in writing it of course.

I do hope you continue with this story. The world you are starting to create is fascinating, and I definitely want to know more. The sex, while hot, is actually secondary to the main character's journey.

I can't wait to read more.

You did a really good job of putting us in Abi’s shoes. You can taste her desires and her lust so well.

Where is the remaining