All Comments on 'Summer'

Lovely scenario, well depicted details and great turn of events. Just riveting. Definitely 5* rating.

Fucking hell, that was sweet and erotic and powerful and all that it should have been. Bravo.

...helluva setting!

It was bordering the 'forbidden' - even the disgusting - but never crossed the line.

Real story or not: It just FELT real. And I'm eager to move on to part two!

That said I just want to tell you that I find it inspiring and it encourages me to put some more effort into some rather marginal projects to read somthing so very well done.

Thank you!

That was such an incredibly erotic story! Great job!

Very well written, with a few minor typos here and there, but nothing that really detracted from your story. It was all very plausible.

Why havent ive seen this before

Sorry, although well written, the participants are too old, this type of behaviour would have involved someone in their mid teens. Certainly 14/15 year olds.

So you rapped your friend and write about it online? Are you proud of it? Fucking freak, I hope someone crushes your skull you sadistic fuck.

I see part two, I don't think I would mind a turn about is fair play. That is if Sue hasn't brought charges.

I think of you as tied to a tree, and she can't quite get the right motion to jack you off. Maybe one of your friends lends a hand.

There's a story there

i am not surprised at this being true rape story

few of the rapists glorifying their conquest of a naive virgin lonely underconfident tomboy on literotica

basically you exploited someone already marginalised

i am surprised how you guys didnt ended up in jail instead of having fun reciting her humiliation here

this is the reasons girls are discouraged to have guy as even friends

coz of you guys all guys are blamed as pig and animal ,unworthy of trust

do you know why are these girls called tomboy coz they are ignored and outcasted by their female friend

maybe poor sue never had a conversation about the need of bras with her mother,sister or other female friends and relatives

she clearly has no female friend so she hangs out with guys or maybe she has a crush on one of them is it a sin for a girl to like a boy or to hang out with boys with whom she grew

does this never occur to you that she trusted you enough to keep her safe

is it such a sin that they betrayed her frienship with almost a rape ,humiliation and submission

she is their friend? isnt she ?

or she is just another object?

how can you do this to your friend ?

humiliating her, stripping her ,touching her inappropriately

wether she likes or fights how can you do this to your friend ?

do you have no compassion for her ?

is she just some toy for you ?

for me this real incident was plain betrayal of trust?

poor sue had no one to tell her not to trust guys even if they are your childhood friends and suppose to care for you at least,?

i see no guilt in anyones heart here?

they are ready to ruin their friendship just for a min of fun over someones humiliation?

you guys kept on asking for ger consent while you were holfing her down???

other than her humiliation these asking for consent did nothing to her ? she was pinned down even if she had said no you guys already told her in the beginning that she is alone against all of you and so powerless

was she ever given a real chance to say no ?

you all just bullied her or coerced her into all the consent

"She didn't put up much of a fight when we stripped her did she?" Dave asked almost casually returning to the question.

"No, she didn't" I agreed.

she freezed out of shock and fear

not all rape victims fight and say no some are too shocked to understand the situation,too scared to retaliate that what would be the consequences if they fight?

you were 4 guys and she was alone how could she put up a fight

poor thing must have experienced a brainfreeze put if her ordeal

no i am not against you putting your story here

i am surprised that you felt no guilt empowering and coercing her at her humiliation,you mentioned you all laughed and mocked at her

you did this to her coz she meant nothing to you all just a extra tag along to be put to corner

if she comes to yoy willingly again it means

she has no one to talk some sense into her about her ordeal

or

she felt as an attractive girl for the first time

or

she liked it or anyone of you enough to be willing to be just mere fucktoy for all of you

coz after this no guy will want her as his gf or partner

no guy wants a girl who has been naked and groped by his friend

so her fate is just being a whore for 4 of you or any more guys you would pimp her too

again since its a true story you guys are beyond redemable and its pure betrayal of trust and frienship rather than lust or being erotic

moral of the story

girls should be discouraged making friends with guys or hanging out with guys coz in the end no matter how gud friends you are he and his friends will rape you

its better to live alone if you have no female friends to hang out with atleat you will not be betrayed by the bunch of lowlives who claim to be your childhood friends with best intentions for you at their heart

i mostly enjoy and go for noncon as it excites me and arouses me but this does the opposite

but since this isnt a fantasy the girl here is purely naive not a slut or tease and considered them her gud friends this fact and not mere story disappointed me

i am sorry but i will drop the story here its too hard and sad for me too continue this

it felt real

but the characters must be quite younger definitely lot lesser than 18

i mean they are old enough to have beers but not a naked girl not even in magzines

common admit it all the characters are minors

in the era of porn most teenage guys barely 13-14 too know how a pussy looks or how a women looks when they have orgasm even if they havent seen one in real

and also had these guys being adults never attended those sex education class ?

you dont need to strip a girl to know about her pussy and tits

just go for penthouse or playboys or some porn

also why did you guys kept holding her during her orgasms she wasnt running away ?you already had compliant

This was the most exciting and erotic story I have ever read. Great job!