All Comments on 'Summer at Home Ch. 02'

when do he make love to the women and make them his.they want to please and seen submissive,so take charge boy.this a sex site,where is the sex.

Sex comes in many packages, and we all have different tastes. (hmm, double entendres everywhere!) A nice build up to the act, or acts, is wonderful. I like a slow build, and lots of foreplay is perfect, even on a hot sex site like Literotica. For me, the innuendo, the clothing, the pictures, all build nicely. Don't rush! Looking forward to chapter 3.

I got so TIRED of the "BLURTED OUT" thoughts I just gave up - what an absolutely bullshit contrivance. Is our hero so inept as to be that mentally and verbally transparent? Once was charming, twice okay, the third repetitious, the fourth tiresome, the fifth annoying - and then I just fucking gave up.

Terrible shame too, because I was enjoying the story.

I can't believe your editors let you beat that dead horse into hamburger and didn't try to walk to back from the edge.

Bummer.

good build up