All Comments on 'Summer Evenings in the Open Air'

it went down hill after that,why kill the story?

The action was nice and hot, and these characters come across as a jolly group of horndogs and hornpusses. However, the author needs to stick to one tense. A sudden--and inconsistent--switch to the present tense indicates inattentiveness to the writing. He probably had great fun writing the story, but then he needed to go back and edit the thing. Also, Tony getting butt-fucked by Harry towards the end did not ring true to me. Neither had really indicated any interest in that direction, and the scene seemed out of context. Still, I've read worse.