All Comments on 'Summer Fun'

For your first time on Literotica here, this story was well written. I also like the slow build up, though I almost wish I had started reading after you get further along so I could get further along as well:::wink:: But I really enjoyed it and please follow up with the rest soon.

please continue and soon

Please continue this story. You've left us hanging, and throbbing!

Lets can the oversized dicky (Another clue that the author is a guy in spite of the moniker)

The story line was well done and should be left right where it is.

The grown ups among us know what is going to be put where and how it will feel.

In my opinion this is not a complete chapter. Erotica needs someone to climax in each chapter. Good start please finish.

Great first chapter for a story, maybe a bit anticlimactic at the end but still a very good read. I look forward to its follow up chapters.

hot story and very well written. Lets have more stories.

Leaving Mommy all hot and bothered and Phil looking for a hole to plug and leaving us hanging! Shame on you! :) Seriously, I thought that this was a great story, but it could use bit of editing and a final review before submissio would be good. Also, when they left to go car shopping, you confused her panties. She put on boy panties in the BR, then when she got in the car, was showing off thong.

well done. that was the kind of tease story i like. moms almost on fire and her son might get burned up at the cabin.

Hope this story lives up to its start. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Please tell me that you are hard at work on future chapters! This is a very good begining and although there are two more already written, I know they won't last! ;)

Hope to here from you soon!

Wastevof time u read the build up wich just details their fancy lifestyle and nothing happens I didn't give it zero stars cuz its not available

Not only is the story rather dull but the author needs to make their mind up about

certain things. First the woman puts on a green skirt which later turned into a black

one, then she wears boy cut panties which suddenly become a thong. My advice is

to read your own story and check the continuity prior to submission.