All Comments on 'Summer Job'

I do hope you are planning a continuation with these two.

This is a great story, well written and believable. 5 stars

I enjoyed it profusely

Nicely done!

Whether you continue this or not, what you've written comes to a clear conclusion and stands alone perfectly.

Predictable. Pleasant, Well written but way too long

Thought there for a second I thought he wouldn't confront his demon Samantha, but age old story line brings nice results. I would've been alright with him not screwing a married woman though.

The bikini top in the pocket trick was awesome!

"...but way too long...." Yah gotta be kidding? This story was as long as the author intended it to be. T o tell the story the author wanted to tell.

You simply deserve five stars, no less! Keep such jewels coming!!

Very well written and I truly enjoyed it!

It wasn't too long IMO and a follow up story would be great!

Great story

Three stars. Average, decent writing, not much more. I truly found this lacking in passion and sparkle.

Enjoyed the story for the most part. Felt like the characters were mostly realistic. The only thing that really detracted from it was the constant use of names within conversation. When two people are alone and talking together, they don't drop each other's name every other paragraph. It felt unnatural. The ending felt a bit rushed too. But those are meant as constructive. I thought the story showed promise and will look for more.

Like i said above, 5 stars!

Thanks for a coherent story with believable characters. You have a real talent for writing!

This is a nicely-written story that flows smoothly. The high point is probably swimming at the quarry; the meeting with Samantha seemed a little contrived, but certainly didn't distract from the overall enjoyment. Keep up the good work, please!

This was an amazing story!

Well done, belevable charicters and story, a lovelly romance.

Any man that will bed a married woman isn't much of a man at all. Megan's getting future heartbreak and Samantha is lucky to get away from this male slut.

Those who have nasty things to say never sign their name.

Male slut indeed, worry about your own life and morals and judge not lest you be judged

It was entertaining and I thought the plot and interaction between the characters was fairly realistic for their age group.

fucking the cougar was a mistake(one time mistake???), shows an extreme lack of decent character. females beware...

Very nice, indeed. I love the way it was written, the dialogue seemed so realistic. Just the way young people would interact. As for the "couger" being a mistake?

Puh-leeese! He was a college kid with no romantic attachments at all. He's going to turn down a good looking woman who throws herself at him? In what world does that happen? A 5 star effort, without a doubt.

This is a very wholesome and beautiful story. It made me laugh, it made me horny and in the end it made me well up.

Simply beautiful!

Liked the build up immensely. Well done.

I thought Meg was going to see the love bite mark.

I don’t quite buy Megan being so quick to forgive him for sleeping with the MILF. That just didn’t ring true and for Megan to have sex with him the same day, nah, just way too unbelievable.