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All Comments on 'Summer Lover'

by KimbersFantasy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Kimbers fantasy.............

more like male fantasy

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
not bad

a good story, this sounds like it was a good vacation

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not good

So obviously written by a guy. You should work on your storytelling, this reads like someone's fantasy instead of a narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hmm...

Could of been a good story. It was just far to rushed.

Good luck with future submissions.

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