All Comments on 'Summer Of Discovery'

This is a great story. I really look forward to later chapters

Really enjoyed it. hope you follow it up.

Nice conceit, the empath mindmeld thoughts_and_feelings exchange capability. Develop it further, make each able to experience the emotions & sensations that the other undergoes, especially orgasm! so they can experience each other's cum simultaneously with their own...

And make them able to telepathically "send" some of their mental thought/feeling powers to another who is willing to receive... like the frend who's horny for her brother.

I especially like the way you introduced the new character(the HOT HORNY girlfriend - but give Mel equal time in your next writing). Perhaps the parents can have some fun also.

Real good story, really hope that you continue.

good start ..i will read all the stories you write about them

Enjoyed your story very much.

I found it easy to read & very hot!

Please make sure they stay invoved in each other's interludes. It's a shame they don't have another sister (or do they??)

Anyway, keep up the good work, look forward to the following chapters.

Continue the plot and expand the characters. Looking forward to reading more!

Brilliant story, I look forward to reading the next one. ps write it quickly

To many stories have to much sex and not enough about the feelings involved. You have done a great job with this but a little more detail on the developing feelings would make it better. Just my opinion that I am sure not all will agree with. I will look forward to your next one with anticipation.

I'm wondering if you're going to have them fucking 1 another while, at the same time, you have them fucking others? Interesting problem since it won't be 'Incest' unless you DO have them fucking.

very nice story keep up more chapter to the end.

Interesting how it affected this brother and sister. Good story.

Great start to a great story. Hope to see part 2 very soon.